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When you are describing,

A shape, or sound, or tint;

Don't state the matter plainly,

But put it in a hint;

And learn to look at all things,

With a sort of mental squint.

~Charles Lutwidge Dodgson (Lewis Carroll)
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PostSubject: Awkward Love   Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:37 pm

I'm trying to create a semi-romantic relationship between two characters, but right now it all just seems awkward. I've tried it a different way, but then it turned too romantic. I'm just trying to create kind of an affectionate relationship, does anyone have any advice?

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PostSubject: Re: Awkward Love   Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:31 pm

Think about how two people would act. If it seems natural, it's probably realistic. Watch people if it helps.

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PostSubject: Re: Awkward Love   Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:38 pm

ooh, PEOPLE WATCHING!!!!! YEAY!!!!! I guess maybe it takes a little personal experience with romantic relationships of which I have none.

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PostSubject: Re: Awkward Love   Sat Jul 17, 2010 7:56 am

Yeah. People watching is the next best method.

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PostSubject: Re: Awkward Love   Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:28 am

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